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Preface | |
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Rewrite before Writing | |
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Why Do We Resist Rewriting? | |
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An Invitation: Write with Me | |
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How Do You Find Something to Write About? | |
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Brainstorming | |
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Interview Yourself | |
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Circle the Subject | |
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Try Out Lines | |
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Play with Images | |
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Make Connections | |
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What If | |
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Be Specific | |
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End-of-Chapter Interviews | |
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Interview with a Published Writer | |
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How to Get the Writing Done: Tricks of the Writer's Trade | |
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Nulla Dies Sine Linea | |
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Establish Achievable Deadlines | |
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Break a Writing Assignment into Small Daily Tasks | |
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Know Tomorrow's Task Today | |
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Keep a Daybook | |
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Rehearse | |
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A Writer's Place | |
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Reading for Revision | |
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Test Readers | |
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Where Do We Find Test Readers? | |
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What Test Readers Do | |
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The Danger of Test Readers | |
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Setting the Reader's Agenda | |
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Reading Writing in Process | |
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Techniques of Responding | |
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Methods of Reader Response | |
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Rewrite with Focus | |
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Elements of Focus | |
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Selection | |
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Emphasis | |
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Clarity | |
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Premature Focusing | |
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How to Focus | |
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The List | |
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The Discovery Draft | |
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What if I Don't Discover in My Discovery Draft? | |
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How Do I Make an Instructor's Idea My Own? | |
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Understand the Assignment | |
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Interview the Assignment | |
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Rewrite by Context | |
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Connect | |
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How Do I Make the Boss's Idea My Own? | |
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Focus Repair | |
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Diagnosis: No Focus | |
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Testing Your Focus | |
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If the Diagnosis Is Positive | |
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Say One Thing | |
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How Can I Find That One Thing? | |
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But What about All the Other Good Stuff? | |
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Frame Your Meaning | |
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What to Leave Out | |
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What to Keep In | |
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Set the Distance | |
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When to Use Close-ups | |
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When to Step Back | |
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When to Zoom | |
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Interview with a Published Writer | |
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Rewrite with Genre | |
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Choosing the Genre | |
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Genre Provides Meaning | |
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The Five-Paragraph Theme | |
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The Unshaped Material | |
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Diagnosis: Ineffective Genre | |
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Genre Communicates Meaning | |
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Discovering the Genre for the Draft | |
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The Internal Genre | |
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The External Genre | |
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The Essential Narrative | |
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Narrative's Clock | |
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Questions Answered: Questions Asked | |
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Walking Beside the Reader | |
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Reading the Listener | |
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Entertaining the Reader | |
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Design Your Own Genre | |
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The Discovered Genre | |
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The Invented Genre | |
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Create an Effective Design | |
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What Is Saved | |
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What Is Discarded | |
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Case History of a Student Writer | |
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Rewrite with Structure | |
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Diagnosis: Disorder | |
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Answer the Reader's Questions | |
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Outline After Writing | |
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Expose the Structure of a Draft | |
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Outline After Writing | |
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Adapt the Structure | |
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Redesign the Structure | |
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Interview with a Student Writer | |
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Rewrite with Documentation | |
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Diagnosis: Too Little Information | |
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The Writer's Eye | |
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The Importance of Information | |
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Provides Reader Satisfaction | |
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Establishes Authority | |
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Produces Lively Writing | |
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The Qualities of Effective Information | |
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Accuracy | |
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Specificity | |
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Significance | |
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Fairness | |
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The Basic Forms of Information | |
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Where Do You Find Information? | |
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Memory | |
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Observation | |
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Internet | |
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Interview | |
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Library | |
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Attribution | |
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Writing with Information | |
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The Craft of Selection | |
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Style | |
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Interview with a Student Writer | |
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Rewrite to Develop | |
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Diagnosis: Superficial | |
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Techniques of Development | |
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Develop with Information | |
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Develop with Authority | |
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Develop with Clarity | |
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Put Meaning in Context | |
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Rewriting Starts with Rereading | |
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Read Fragments | |
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Read What Isn't Written | |
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Problem: No Territory | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: No Surprise | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: No Writer | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: No Respect | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: Too Little | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: Too Much | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: Too Private | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: No Significance | |
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Solution | |
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Problem: No Connection | |
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Solution | |
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Rewrite within the Draft | |
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Emphasize the Significant | |
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Pace and Proportion | |
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Length | |
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Rewrite by Ear | |
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What Is Voice? | |
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Hearing Your Own Writing | |
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Diagnosis: No Voice | |
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Hearing the Writer's Voice | |
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Hearing Your Own Voice | |
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Your Language or Mine? | |
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The Importance of Voice | |
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The Expected Voice | |
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The Formal Voice | |
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The Informal Voice | |
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Genre Voices | |
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The Voice of the Draft | |
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Case History of a Professional Writer | |
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Rewrite with Clarity | |
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Twenty Ways to Unfinal a Draft | |
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The Attitude of the Editing Writer | |
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Writing Is Editing | |
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Imagine the Reader | |
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My Ear Is a Better Editor Than My Eye | |
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The Draft Will Tell You What It Needs | |
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Welcome Surprise | |
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Language Is Alive and Changing | |
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Accept Limitations | |
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Establish Achievable Standards | |
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Interview Your Draft | |
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Solutions to Common Editing Problems | |
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How Do I Recognize Surprise? | |
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How to Read to Edit | |
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How to Edit a Boring Draft so It Isn't | |
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The Craft of Editing | |
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The Tools of Revision | |
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A Student Case History | |
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The Student's Original Draft | |
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A Professional's Editing | |
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The Student's Reaction to Professional Editing | |
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The Student's Revision | |
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The Craft of Letting Go | |
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Why Writers Don't Let Go | |
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Fear of Exposure | |
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Obsession with Correctness | |
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Continuing Discovery | |
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How to Let Go | |
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Deadlines | |
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Collaboration | |
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Decreased Discovery | |
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When You Let Go | |
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Readers Make the Draft Theirs | |
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Free to Write | |
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Index | |