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Acknowledgments | |
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Headlines | |
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Headlines: The Prime Seller of Newspapers and the Copy Editors Who Write Them | |
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What Kind of People Work on the "Desk"? | |
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A Career That Lasts Beyond Retirement | |
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Headlines: The Door to Copy-Editing Mastery | |
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It's Your Turn to Write a Headline | |
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A Gallery of Classic Headline Gaffes | |
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Serious Stories = Serious Headlines | |
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"Counting" the Headline | |
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The Copydesk Routine | |
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Two Systems for Doing the Count | |
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Counting in Numerical Sequence | |
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Counting by Character Widths | |
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Into Action | |
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Deciphering the Head Order | |
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Learning Attitude Adjustments | |
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Specialty Headlines | |
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Kickers | |
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Hammerheads (a.k.a. Hammers) and Wickets | |
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The Slammer | |
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Tripods | |
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Sidesaddles | |
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The Master Lists of Forbidden Words in Headlines | |
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Forbidden Words: Sports | |
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Forbidden Words: Hard News | |
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Alleged and Accused | |
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Setting Up a Work Regimen and Determining the First Word (the Subject)--and the Second (the Verb) | |
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Setting Up a System | |
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Find Out "Whodunit" and the Headline's First Word Will Appear | |
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What to Do When You Hear "Voices" | |
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The Headline's Second Word: The Verb | |
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What to Do About "Is" and "Are"--the "To-Be" Verbs | |
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Agreement of Subjects with Their Verbs | |
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Down Among the Collectives, Agreement Is Still in the Eye of the Beholder: Is It "The Couple Was" or "The Couple Were"? | |
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The Verb as the Headline's First World: The "Verb Head" | |
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Headline Punctuation, Abbreviations, and the Use of Numbers and Symbols | |
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Periods | |
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Commas | |
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Semicolons | |
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Quotation Marks | |
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Colons | |
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Dashes and Parentheses in Feature Stories | |
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Apostrophes | |
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Question Marks | |
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Exclamation Points | |
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Abbreviations | |
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Acronyms | |
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Numbers and Symbols | |
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Line Breaks, Decks, Jumps--and Second-Day Headlines | |
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Line Breaks | |
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Decks (a.k.a. ROS or Read-Outs) | |
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Subheads | |
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Second-Day Heads | |
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Jump Headlines and "Continued" Lines | |
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The Art of Writing Feature Headlines | |
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The Clever-Headline Writer | |
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The Masters of the "Clever" Head | |
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Different Papers, Different Head Styles | |
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Boning Up on Style Before Starting on a Copydesk | |
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Counts Too Short or Too Long? | |
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Names in Headlines | |
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Headline Styles for News of Fires, Accidents, and Major Disasters | |
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Copy Editing | |
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An Overall Look at Copy Editing Today | |
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The Impact of the "Maestro" System and Pagination | |
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Attitude and Editing | |
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The Editing Routine | |
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Into Action | |
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Editing Features and Opinion Pieces | |
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Editing by Computer | |
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Hard-Copy Editing | |
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Editing for Organization | |
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A New Method for Editing a News Story's Organization | |
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The Basics of Newspaper Story Organization | |
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Hard-News Organization | |
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How to Code a Story | |
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Coding "Delayed" Leads and Discovering Buried Leads | |
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Feature Story Organization | |
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Organization of Second-Day Stories and a Series of Articles | |
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Some Last Words on Editing for Organization | |
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Editing the Lead | |
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Editing Hard-News Leads | |
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Immediate Leads | |
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Editing Other Styles of Immediate Leads | |
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Delayed Leads | |
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The "You" Lead | |
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Editing Feature Leads | |
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Editing the Close and Quotes | |
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The Hard-News Close | |
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Feature-Story Closes | |
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Editing Quotations | |
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Detecting "Phony" Quotes | |
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Editing Quotes from the Unschooled or the Foreign Born | |
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Which Quotes Should Be Killed? | |
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Partial Quotes | |
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Placement of Quotation Attributions | |
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Adds and Trims | |
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Adds | |
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Trims | |
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Major Trims | |
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Notebook Dumping and Stray-Fact Hitchhikers | |
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Minor Trims | |
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Lancing the Boils and Bloodsuckers in Sentences | |
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Editing Stories Involving Numbers | |
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Suspicious Numbers | |
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Recognizing Statistical Bias | |
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Suspicious Research Numbers | |
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Understanding Property Taxes | |
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Editing Percentages | |
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How to Calculate Percentages | |
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Figuring the Percentages of Increases and Decreases | |
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Stock Market News | |
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Editing the Market's Ups and Downs | |
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"Times as Great" Is Not "Times Greater Than" | |
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Nautical Numbers | |
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Betting Odds | |
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The Writing Style Used for Numbers | |
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Attributions, Identifications, and Second References | |
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Attribution Form and the Venerable "Said" | |
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Attribution Placement | |
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Identifying Sources in Attributions | |
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Coping with Long Titles | |
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Second and Subsequent References to Sources in the News | |
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Pronouns in Second References: When "He" and "She" Become "Their" and "They" | |
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Catching Errors in Grammar and Usage (That/Which, Who/Whom, Parallelism, Subjunctive Mood, and Other Pitfalls) | |
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As and Like | |
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Because and Since | |
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Lay, Lie, and Pay | |
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Like and Such As | |
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On | |
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Should and Shall | |
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Where | |
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While | |
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Who and Whom | |
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Who's/Whose and It's/Its | |
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Parallelism | |
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Relative Pronouns: That, Which, and Who | |
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Verb-Agreement Dilemmas | |
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Split Infinitives | |
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Subjunctive Mood | |
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Transition Words and Forbidden Words in Text | |
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Hard-News Transitions | |
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Feature Story Transitions | |
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The Master List of Forbidden Words and Expressions in Copy | |
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Forbidden Terms in Text | |
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Writing and Editing Captions | |
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Making Captions Fit | |
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Writing the Caption | |
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The State of the Caption Elsewhere | |
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L = Look Before You Leap | |
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O = Subtract the Obvious by Adding Substance | |
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M = Reflect the Mood of the Illustration | |
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I = Check Identifications | |
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S = Spelling and Grammar | |
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A = Accuracy and Preventing Litigation | |
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Accuracy and Libel | |
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Two Safeguards for Headlines and Copy: Pursuing Accuracy and Avoiding Lawsuits | |
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Joseph Pulitzer: "What a newspaper needs ... is ... accuracy, accuracy, accuracy!" | |
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Time, Inc. Publications: Role Models for Exemplary Accuracy | |
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Lawsuits: College Publications Are Eligible Too | |
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Even When Papers Win, the Lawsuit Is a Lose-Lose Situation | |
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"Serial Killer Arrested," "Marijuana Cases," and Other Libelous Headlines | |
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War Stories of "Near Misses" and "Direct Hits" May Be the Best Libel Teachers | |
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The Increase of Multimillion-Dollar Lawsuits and the Uniform Correction Law | |
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A Sampler of Practical Protective Systems for Copy Editors | |
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Job Hazards: Dealing with Too Many Earthquakes, Monicas, and Shootings | |
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Notes | |
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Glossary of Copydesk Terms | |
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Bibliography | |
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Index | |